Wednesday, 6 June 2018

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Aloha my name is Tutanekai i am 11 years old i have 2 younger siblings, Aliyah is year 3 at mangapapa school Chama is a year 0 at mangapapa school. My hobbies are riding my bike i love riding motorbikes i enjoy writing i enjoy rugby and i would like to would like to get the student of the week. i live in gisborne  my nickname is Tk i go too gisborne intermediate school my favorite subject is P.E. and swimming .

2 comments:

  1. Kiaora tutanekai great writing,I like the way how you said you would like to get student of the week. keep it up

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  2. kia ora Tutanakai amazing writing I really liked when wrote how you love riding motorbikes and how you said you want to get student of the week I think your profile could be improved if you added capital letters to your writing keep up the good work

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